WIP ~ Dead in the Water Lineart (Vent)

IMPORTANT NOTE: Because of the file size, it looks VERY fuzzy until you zoom into full view!!!

Just a preview for what I'm working on. I'm kind of happy with how it currently looks, so I thought I should save/submit the lineart before I destroy it as usual with my coloring ;3. 
Enjoy!

Based on the song: "Dead in the Water" by Ellie Goulding (go listen to it NOW, it's beautiful )
More critically based off of my poem "Dead in the Water" (the poem was also inspired by the song):  Dead in the Water (Vent)"I'm there in the water.
Can't you see?"
My body goes limp as I sink,
I allow the darkness to embrace me.
I'm cradled as I descend,
Finally cared for and safe to shed my tears.
As if I'm returning to the womb,
Just another circle of life.
The last remnants of my stamina
Enable me to open my eyes.
A few rays of sunlight,
penetrate the darkness.
They caress my skin,
and remind me of what I once had,
and what I'm leaving behind.
Memories dance through my thoughts.
I struggle to stretch out my arm,
as if testing to see if you'll take hold of me
and pull me back into the sunlight.
The vast water is all that greets my touch.
My arm recoils in relent
but a kind grin tugs at the corners of my lips,
because I know the fight is over.
It's ok that you're too weak to hold my hand.
I'll be ok,
I promise.  
"I'm there in the water,
Can't you see?"
But it's ok,
I'm safe now.
It's time to let me go,
I'm ready to fly on to other things.
It's time to regain my wings,
And glide grace

Why:
Yeah ... I've not been doing so well mentally ... or physically for that matter. Please don't ask.


UPDATE: Complete drawing = 



_{Time: Incomplete
Refs: None
Tools: Sketchbook express, trackpad
Not free to use without my permission
Vitrescent(the creepy creature thing X'D) @ Me
Silaluk(the cat) @ Me
Art @ Me}